An extract from my Work In Progress 'Nicholas' waiting to be cut!
I feel this is a good scene, but it would make one of my characters a murderer and I'm not sure I should... the scene might yet get cut... does anyone think the scene should be kept in? There's time to save it if you send a reply... to carol.m.mottershead@gmail.com -
I" believed he was my love, for
the rest of my life. I can’t believe how I can still be hurt by his memory. The
loss of my friend... and lover... he can still hurt me... yet he is no longer
the one causing me the pain, it is myself! Why? Other than let him kill me, I
did everything I could to try to make things work between us. I had to survive
him. To wake up every morning wishing you hadn’t... it couldn’t go on. It was
me or him in the end and I had every reason to live now... my child... the
child now growing inside me... the child he will never get to know, the child
he must never meet. For now, my only reason for living is to look after my
baby, our baby... it is the only good thing to come out of this horrible mess! I’ll make sure he has the best life I can
give him. He is my priority... I would give my life for my child..."
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